In “Version 1”, I feel that the secondary figure distracts from the main figure. It needed a lighter touch. I removed it - easily done with clay - added more text, and arrived at “Version 2”.
When finishing a piece of work, I am rarely sure of the value of what I have created and doubtful if my first intensions have been fulfilled. I’ll sleep on it.
In the meantime, let me know what you think.
Definitely like the second, best.
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